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ACQUISITION EMAIL PROPOSAL
Senior Copywriter / Content Manager

This is one of the first Echelon emails I received. I saw opportunity to take a more acquisitional approach, so I went with it (…apparently “acquisitional” isn’t a word, but I’m here to say it should be).

PROPOSED EMAIL

Subject line: Get to know us 👋
Preaheader: Find what moves you.

EXISTING EMAIL

Subject line: Let us introduce ourselves 😊
Preheader: [none that I can tell]